Most people don't like to take the time to read something so long... that's why, even though this is a good peice, you won't get many responses. Unless all the rest of Rapbattles cares to make me look like a dumbass...
The flow was amazing, your use of simple phrases andm emotions quickly rolled was well placed in this. I was upset in the beginning, I felt different emotions through out, no lie I about cried at the end... more emotional stuff that the words connected with but still. I felt like this peice flowed well. This is a new style that I havent' seen very much of... quick, flowing, emotional, repetative, impacting,....all of these come to mind when I think of this peice. You're gifted with a different spectrum of tallent, I hope to see more of it spread throughout this site. An keep ya head up an droppin more great peices.