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originally posted by mr.iceman06
this was OK. u need to elevate your vocab. u had a lil bit of wordplay in there but it wasnt much. your rhyme scheme was alright but again it was basic. that will not win u any battles my nigga. try to elevate yo vocab.
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^word^ it wasn't bad but u can elevate a lil more...
aight check mine:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87496