Daaaaang... I can't say that I've read anything recently that has made me think about things like that this much. You present a challenging argument with powerful emotions to back it up. Nothing you've given has come out as a weak stab. Especially not that one line which no joke my jaw dropped at. I may sound like an idiot but it sounded like the searing insults that 2 extremely intellegent people pass back and forth in an argument, if that makes sense... it does to me but I'm a bit off. I liked how you could take a subject that not too many people can write on, pull out all the major points/doubts that people of the common faith may have and give us an awe inspiring peice. Well done, I have much respect for you as a poet... keep droppin deep peices, daring to ask the questions most of us don't, peace