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Old 10-24-03, 11:19 AM   #4
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nice piece
started off kind of slowly then picked up and u did a dope topical
some stand out lines..

'Untill the one day, when god has to take away your life
Not by taking life from your body, but by taking away your wife
Or just taking the one person, who makes living life worth the time
You have memories of their sweet voice, mixed with the sound of a flatline
^quite simple but was very effective

'You can debate all the reasons, but your born with clay on your plate
You have to learn how to mold it, cause faith wont do it for you
^dope....really good imagery right there

the flow was solid thru out....imagery was good in places...expressed your view well...and also added a confused factor in there which got u thinking about shit
props
peep mine if u will
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