babygurl, this was a nice drop
It kept my interest up untill the very end
just heartfelt emotions
the way everything flowed was just tight as fuck... good structure, nice use of words and imagery
fav line:

call the police- i been had/ call the ambulance- i hurt so bad/
cupid missed me shootin, so I was stabbed

Keep droppin, this was definitely something I luved reading, although it was long, it kept my interest, so keep droppin gurl.

Resp