this beat might be mashin if it wasnt for 2 things

1. the second note on the piano loop is not intune with the guitar note

2. you gotta work on eqing ur beat. when you're done you should have no problem focusing on each individual instrument. Your drums are a little lost in the mix.

also it might sound better if u added a bass line in there too.

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