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10-24-03, 03:14 PM
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FleX
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Nice story open mic...cudda done wit more complex lines n i wasnt really feelin ya structure n rhyme scheme...this wud b hella alot better in audio..still the story is tight...some deep shit..props
keep droppin
FleX