1 thing to kool, you only rhymed twice in your whole rhyme, is and again doesnt rhyme, tubes and lady doesnt rhyme, work on that, and lady, no offense or anything, but ur flow was choppy, some lines were 1 word too many

opener = kool
finisher = kool
structure = none
flow = none
punches = both
wordplay = lady
multis = lady
consistency = lady

vote = lady

you both need to work on structure, ur flows are choppy, no hatin

hit this battle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87324