just for looks sake, drop the hypens...
aight the topic was simple enough and you stuck to it
flow was off and on...structure was bad... get them lines to match
"fiend" and "crack" should not be like that because thats 2 far fetched of wordplay... you need thins like
Im a "male" man when im in the "post"
^^makes no sense but follow me?

it was good but work on that
if you would be so kind peep
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