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Old 10-24-03, 06:13 PM   #15
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1 thing to kool, you only rhymed twice in your whole rhyme, is and again doesnt rhyme, tubes and lady doesnt rhyme, work on that, and lady, no offense or anything, but ur flow was choppy, some lines were 1 word too many



SO TRUE!


read my damn verse and stop riding
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