Aight aight....Cali, Con very very nice drop...both are very talented in this field.... everything just had an even flow as I am used to from both...

Calisto:
(theres that gun shaped poem again...haha just playin) Man you can feel the emotion comin out of this girl..your whole piece was very well mapped out in the direction you wanted to go with this.. I'm not really crazy about the whole love joints but you kept interested thru out...very beautiful words girl...


These profound emotions, some how battling for my mouth's pronunciation
Daily my mind is winning the more realistic war for my heart's resignation
I dare not use the word love, for my heart's not fully in that mentality
Then again, my mind is floating gleefully between there and my reality
^^^these lines stuck out at me wit that slappin force..I looked at this before I even started reading the piece and they jumped out don't really know why but ya got my eye with these...made me want to read the rest of the poem..very impressed.

Content:
the structure in this piece made it very easy to flow with...The content of the peice was very deep...you showed some very raw emotion and lyrical skill here son...ill shit

perhaps I can change your manuscript oh im not talking
about candles and wicks once again another metaphor
missed...lovely scripts from the beautiful silhouette of
a cant miss...a meant for...passionately wished..
what type of passion is this?
when the clock strikes for a future wife the phoenix
screams shall be that of a flyish hybrid containing
higher learning evident intelligence..
^^^just got me thinking on some shit we was talkin about earlier. pulled me into the piece very nicely...but as I was saying I think you are right and no I will not be an idiot...haha...keep bringin the raw.

Long ass piece but well worth the read....not a real big fan of love type drops but this was put together very nicely and just seemed to draw me into the whole piece...well done well done. its Prov signin off at ya request..

...WaR...