rhymes - very basic
metaphor - there was some nice ones
wordplay - pretty weak... u gotta work on this
punchlines - werent really necessary in this drop
overall thisa verse iight stays on topic, but u definetly need to
improve ya skills big time

Heres some tips

Punchlines -1. your a wack kid that thinks he's sick but he has wack-spits,
even if u was an acrobat witta trampolene u still couldnt do back-flips,

WordPlay- you tryin to impress me and im not even pleased,
you think you 'ILL' i say u gotta disease,

Multi's - just two consecutive rhymes EXAMPLE

Ill~Lines to Kill~Minds, Im battlin the wackest i Still~Find,

Sick~Flows, like blood comin from a Ripped~Nose,
Youd be a female witta button up suit and still couldnt Strip~
Clothes,


Hopefully this shit helps u out a little bit bro..
keep droppin.
peace