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okie. good verse..needs some work...try and keep yourlines together though, like...
Then commit to ressurection I'ts the best-protection,
I set off an aray of vibes that press-ya-neck-in,
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replay...
Then commit a hormonious resuection of my suited perfection
Shooting arays through vibes clinchin your neck to a combustion
summin like that...i figured i'd try an help you out as well...keep it up man. later
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