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Old 10-24-03, 10:02 PM   #8
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You've Been Dissed All Ya Life,But Ya Couldn't Last A Week.
^ OH NOO SHIT THATS TOO HARSH!

-Brixton-
Your Style Is Exactly Like Mine Fo Real!
I Thought That Was Me Battelin For A Quick Second LOL
But Nah U Came Hard!

I Hear The Lord Calling, Its Time To Merk N Send You Above,
But I Bet Ya Kill Yaself, Like Kurt Cobain Did For Courtney Love.
^ I Dont Like That Line Its Too Kind LoL

So Put Yaself Outta Misery, In Fact...Do It For The Rest Of Us,
Or Jump In An Institution...So You Bounce Of Walls N Get Fuked.
^ Sounds Like Somethin I Would Say To My Ex B.f
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Talon You Had Good Multis

Ya RHYME IS CORKED...stashed away in a FINE RESORT eating you for lunch with a KNIFE AND FORK...
TALON’S QUITE DISTORT...I'll LIGHT THE TORCH and bring "bra's" to ya "casket" n give ya "LIFE SUPPORT"...

^ I Dont Like The Way You Add In Capitals And Put Dots........<
And then use these ""

Without That It Would Look So Much Better


I'll SEVER THIS FAG...Ya 'text is trash'...might as well put ya LETTERS IN 'BAGS'...
Like your "record" I'm "losing my patience" with battling you wack cats like low-profit "MEDICAL STAFFS"...

^ Its Kinda Played But Meh Its Aight

I'm Treatin-Ya-Worst... Decieven~With~Curse, -Brixton- I'd Make U *Eat Ya Own Words* But It's Probaly Not Even-Ur-Verse!!
(He's A Fuckin' Biter... Pathetic!)
^ I Like That!!!!

Aight Well Lets C...

Why Do I Feel So Nervous When Voting In This LOL?

punches=Tied up
multis=Talon
Metaz=-Brixton-
structure=Brixton-
wordplay=Tie

Seriously I Cant Stand A Verse With Bad Structure It Makes Me Not Wanna Read It.. But Keep Elevatin And Dont Vote Against Me Cuz Im Only Votin Fairly

Vote=Brix
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