kind of abstract verse mixed with normal writing styles
i liked it for what it was
the flow started off really good....and then slowed down
dont know if that was intentional...
overall though it seemed to merge together well to tell the way of your living?
some parts were hard to grasp what their significance was but i got the jist of most of it
i couldnt pick out any standout lines really....just all came together well
liked the last paragraph as well
props
peep mine if u will