Thread: Verbal Limits
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Old 10-25-03, 05:52 AM   #2
Otherwordz
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this was hot...as usual...evrything but the multi'z were on point...but I did notice a semi-multi in the 1st coupla linez...and the flow kinda makez up for lack of multi'z...but still...a good multi doez wonderz for the flow...instead of just rhymin' the last word of every line...try rhyming the last 2 or 3 wordz in every line...that is a multi...and once you master that...you can try to rhyme whole sentences...like I do on occasion......it's ok though twin...you still ALMOST as sexy as me...
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