im'a break this one down
opener:tie
closer:tie
structure:none (both had stretched out lines)
wordplay:shady
punches:dominator
overall:dominator


best lines
Shady:none, hardly any of your lines actually made sense
nah dawg hold off on the ~invitation~, i dont wanna be in your punk crew, you guys get no ~appreciation~
^^^^what punk crew^^^^


Dominator:
DAMNNNNNNNNN THAT WAS SOME MERKINNN HAHAH VOTE PLZ
^^^the most true line in the battle^^^^


both y'all need to work on those long, lines, easily more than one battle could of been made out of these.

shady, most of your shit was complicated, it look like you just got two random words, that ryhme, an stuck them into the easiest sentence you could think. (jus keep elevatin)

dominator, pretty much the same really, apart from the tow words, in a line thig, (jus keep elevatin as well)

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