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Old 10-25-03, 09:46 AM   #18
LM
Drop Of Genius
 
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From: The promised land
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Deucedice:
You were flowin nice with some good punches but the flow and rhymescheme seemed to disapear when you said:
yea thats rite wat you gonna do send ya girl raxay to mual me like winnie the pooh/
After that ^^ hardly any of your verse rhymed or made sense. Also your lines seemed to drag on and be too long. I learned that lesson the hard way. Otherall not the worst verse but could be improved a lot.

Yaz:
This was OK, you rhymed OK but lacked a bit of creativity which would of made decidin who won a lot easier. One thing that stood in comparison to deucedice's verse was the use of personals.
Deucedice how can i be the fagg/
Wene your name clearly states, 2 men in da bag/
^^Not the best one I've seen but not the worst. Also I followed your verse easier.


My vote goes to Yaz....He just scraped a win on flow and personals. Not a very good battle tho.
I cant poll so get a mod to add my vote.

Peace!!!
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