talon....you merked yourself in a way in this one....you had good word play and pucnhes...but like lady said, your structure was jacked up....brixton did have some betta punches, wordplay, multis, and STRUCTURE tho....vote goes to brixton....keep elevating tho!

hit this shit up ya'll with an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4219#post864219