I've never seen your pieces before but I liked this one. .The schme was solid & the switch up near the end added enregy & made the flow of the piece more interesting. .The rhymes were a bit simple. .Maybe more multis. .Or maybe I didn't see them : / . . The content was good & I was feeling what you ws saying. .No quatable line. .B'cos all were the same but good. .Props

Reply to either one fo my pieces with some truthful & detailed fededback. .Guess you prolly would. .Good job bruv