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Old 10-25-03, 02:48 PM   #9
pot1ent
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unraveled the knotted excuse
aurevoir torrents of abuse but wait the whispers echo again

That part was great. .The imagery & descriptive text used was amazing. .I really thought that was a highlight. .
Your flow was on point aswell with constant inners which helped it flow nicely. .The topic was the type I felt would of been better on audio so you could put the emotion I gathered you had on it. .This was good. .Maybe try some more multis < But thats all. .Pz
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