yes for a straight forward clear piece like this theres never much to say towards them, its a good way to get feelings out and to vent, and something that you dont spend all your time on trying to figure out a rhyme or scheme. this one here was what you felt and like said something ppl can relate to. maybe now that you have some feelings down try to expand on it and make it a poem.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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