yeah, this read alright, but didn't think much of the content, it seemed a bit simple in places, i agree the second verse was better than the first, it was a better length aswell, you had some ok multis, keep dropin, and you will progress...not bad.........

can you check these, its the first and second verses, just posted on different days.........
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=87520
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=87713