The emotion was definately evident here.. Well written, the rhyming didnt seem forced... I got a little lost in the middle, kinda wandered away from me, but you got back on track, and kept me reading.

God please take my hand, and lead me far from here
I'm afraid of what I might do, if given another year
A dark cloud over head, I'm in a state of depression
Bein' released from the womb, that's my ultimate regression

The ending was great, very strong. Always an important aspect to writing.. Good write, you have a talent, keep writing.

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