I have trouble feeling these gangsta writes also, but I dunno... This one had a message (not relevent to me, but still present aye) .. it did have a loose rhyme scheme..

Id have to say, the format really detracts from it though.. There is flow there, but the style in which its written strangles that. And, spellcheck.. yeah yeah, but nothing does writing more injustice than poor grammar.

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