This strikes me more akin to role playing than poetic scriptures.. But, I guess poetry is to poetry to the writer..

Ive read another of your peices, and the format was similar if I remember correctly. You do have a unique style, and your creativity is evident.. I dunno though, I just cant get into this style of writing, its a personal shortcoming of my own so dont take it personally.

Still an interesting read.

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