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Old 10-25-03, 11:33 PM   #4
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This feels like one big metaphor to me. Im torn between a broken down car, and the loss of a loved one.. am I meant to read it that way or is my mind finally completely wacked out?

Either way, you have a unique and refreshing style... Your very own, and I loved it. The repetition at certain parts placed particular emphasis on the emotions you were feeling, and really gave the piece depth.

Nice writing.
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