Spectator
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This was.... wordy, to say the least... but awesome in its wordiness! If that makes sense.. Im not sure Im making much sense this morning.. oh yeah, anyway.. to the poem. Loved it. Im in awe of some of the lines you've written, the imagery.. the depth. Such a thought provoking piece, a very dark write.
'Stars shine in your name to guide the path of man, but your people are lost......
Through the poverty and destruction you've caused unto this world
You demand victory and demand sacrifice, but still don’t understand truth'
Absolutely loved these lines.. Kudos.
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Great spirits often encounter violent opposition from mediocre minds.
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