I loved the opening lines of this piece. It spoke loud and clear to me, as Ive often felt paralyzed in my own life, unable to live it through fear of dissapointment.. not realising that just being alive is the greatest gift, and that for that, its worth taking the risk.
My mind wandered a little in the second verse, that peaked interest from the opening waned a little for me... But still a nice write.

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