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Old 10-26-03, 12:40 AM   #8
Mystery~murdera
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this one is gonna take breakin down, cuz honestly at this point I'm not sure who won. Although i'm leanin towards feeble... so i'm gonna break this down line by line on 10 point scale here we go...

AXE
Start This Off With A Feeble Diss To Prove, I Don’t Think Much Of You.
Axe Is Better Then Few? You’re The One That’s Reppin’ An Herb Crew! eh... 1-10: 4 weak punch, shoulda made it creative insteada just sayin it
Shove A COMedian Up His Ass, Cuz Feeble’s Crews Are The Butt Of Jokes.
Fucka Wasted Punchline, Beat Feeble With Gimics, Th-Th-Th-That’s All Folks. lol, dat was ight, 1-10: 7 cuz the set-up was whack...
Push Feeble And His Verse Left And Right To Speak With All Jokes Aside.
Rip Out Your Secret Inside, Then Type Multicolored To Expose Your Gay Pride. eh... gimic, n gotta find anotha way to call him gay... 4
Real Feeble In, To Finish Him Off, Cuz I Got Him Hooked… On Phonics.
I Would Take A Shot At Your Manhood, But Thieves Already Busted On It. lol, 7
Feeble’s Dope, I Ain’t A Match. *cough, cough* Harsh Lies, That’s Enough.
^And I’m Not Just Pullin’ Your Leg Feeb’s… I’m Fuckin’ Rippin’ It Off. eh...7

Overall your set-ups are eh, need to be more creative with the disses, too.

FEEBS
battle you.. its what i hope to do, leave ya roped & bruised
rb tried to get rid of the wackness.. simply by choking you
lol, not bad, 8
im furious, axe e. umm sucks, fuck what ya story is -
all ya sig did was make B.I.G... a little less notorious
nice, 8
im not getting mocked.. axe, its you who's getting stopped
& its a turnaround.. when the axe is getting chopped
damn... dat was ight yo, good wordplay nice setup - 9
make amends, his sigs been on B.I.G's dick for days on end
u changed ya name from amby to AXE.. cuz u like to get sprayed on men whack, 6
fake ya threads, im making trends - ya as wack as some
& ya names about the worst wordplay ever.. for axiom
eh...ight, 6
if thats not enough, i'll block ya pride.. w/ cinder fists
this battles goin on D/L for u.. like baseballs injured list
7

ok... let's add up the difference here...

AXE: 50 - 29 = 21
Feebs: 60 - 44 = 16

Feebs get's the vote. Axe didnt come how he usually does and Feebs has elevated. Seemed like axe was on some serious writer's block. You're going to have to edit the poll, for some reason I can't poll vote.

vote - Feebs

oh yea, U guys need to peep my battle with CAPCOM it's gettin heavily slept on n should be closed by now.
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