Whether or not you meant this to be, it did come across very much so as a piece "thanking god" persay.

Overall, there was something I did and I didn't like about this piece.
I don't know. It felt that you weren't completely entralled in this, like you got the topic idea, but didn't believe in it exactly?...

But you had one quote that was just one of the most fucking amazing things I have ever read, honestly.

"Coming at me to slit my throught from ear to ear
Noticing now they just wanted to stop my tears"

That was incredible. One of the best things I have ever read, no word of a lie.