Thread: Rap/R&B Joing...Closer to You
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Old 10-26-03, 08:50 AM   #3
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good piece i thought, i think you cud try and get some more multies and similies though, try to ue a variaty of vocab it makes it sound better but the flow was alright...keep at it..peace
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