yea I agree, I generally am not a stickler for spelling or anything like that but I did feel like the gramatical errors in this peice, spelling aside, distracted from what it could have been. Short peices are intended to hit hard.... I didn't feel this met it's full potential... but again it's a very interesting and vague topic... this could mean a variety of things and that's what great poetry does, relates with everyone! Decent drop, keep elevatin, peace