This topic has been flipped alot of times but you two pulled it off nicely by bringing in the "but what if i stayed" concept.

Edicius's first half of the verse shined to me the most out of his work, the other half was pretty nice, just not as nice as what was before it. The lines that stuck out the most were the intro:

Weird, but this is the place i want to stay,
couldnt imagine what it is like diein today.
At one side it would be jus fine no more pain,
no more tears no more drama & no more games.

On potent's part, I felt that he came the strongest in the center of his piece, good flow from both and good vocabulary. Sometimes a line or two may have been a syllable or two over but if you have a quick tongue with good enunciation you can pull this off. Best part:

Whaling clucks. .Chickens blubbering their eyes out
While my lazy ass would watch kilroy on the coach
Annoyed & lash out, Why the fuck they complaining
When you die its a big change yet it ain't changing
Inevitably lifes arranging in ways that seem certain
When you die everything seems like its not working

This was a nice collab from both of you, You didnt need the ending with the bridge and hook. It didnt take away anything, but it didnt add anything, either.

Good read.

pz..1
-sal
hfe