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Old 10-26-03, 05:54 PM   #4
rule
..Soft Focus..
 
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good peice, i found it cud of had a little more work into it..like a chorus between your verses...i think that wud'a been hot...yet both verses were dope i think word came a little harder but this was actually a good read...uppen this...peace
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