Sharp Perfection.
From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin |
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hmmm where to start, simple put, i liked this piece, it was a nice easy read. on the surface of it it seems to be pure emotion, which it is, with one message, but once you think about it and look in you see how deep it goes, all the branches it takes. i thought the way you portrayed your feelings here made it an effective piece, it read well and sounds good!!
~Tera~
DONT HATE
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~
keep singing in heaven
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