Sharp Perfection.
From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin |
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short, simple put but effective!!! your message was clear, and the way you put it worked well. it had a good structure and flow, but both could use a little work. im a huge tupac fan, and yes i can see the ways it does come off sounding like tupac!! this was a good read!!
~Tera~
DONT HATE
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~
keep singing in heaven
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