This was pretty good i thought...It flowed pretty well i thought as i read it...i liked the multied....wordplay was pretty good as well...your vocab was alright...structure was pretty well on it...content was alright....i liked it, good read...overall it was good, keep at it and keep dropping.

and if you could return some feedback..
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