Dominator took this with better punches...

That's the only story here.

Both ya'll's format sucks rocks, though.

Real stretched lines don't make flow...
And it only makes you look herbish to make em that long and ta add all the ", //, ~, all that...

Claimin Shady, well ya soiling the name...
The fact ya spit dirt, slims ya chances at fame.

See, I hit hard, used nice wordplay with personals, and kept the bar nice and short, easy and quick ta read.

Dominating what? It sure ain't the verse I give...
Change ya name, tell the truth and go by Submissive.

Again, used tight personals, wordplay, and hit pretty good without writing a paragraph.

Flow, wordplay, metas, personals...were all fairly even.

Punches took this, they were harder by Dominator...

Peace

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