yo bro. pretty good piece was a real easy read, u had a real nice use of multi's and some good wordplay and your rhyme scheme was pretty basic. some tight structure in this piece to and ur flow was pretty good. but all in all good piece bro keep droppin.

oh and another thing masta. I wanted to ask u if u wanted to do another up beat collab again sometime, u up for it?

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