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Old 10-27-03, 03:06 PM   #2
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hmm, I thought this is 'all-o-k-rytiee"

I thought this could be much more better

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Cough out the clouds and take a shit in the form of tornadoes


feel dat line, pretty creative, overall this was pretty decent, flow was off a little bit. Was this a little key or summin? felt like it.
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