A lot of emotion you've given on this one. It's funny how life goes huh?...you would just beginning to appreciate something when its already out of your hand. Its like having a piece of cake on the palm of your hand and then all of a sudden someone bumped into you and it fell right on the floor...you may think about the whole 5-second rule but you couldnt keep up with it and no matter how much youve tried to get it back the same as before it was given to you...the only destination of that fallen cake is either the trash or for your dog to eat. Then you would think how did it happen..was it the person who bumped into you that made you lost that cake or was it you.. cuz you didnt hang on it with full care?..or maybe you couldve use your 2 hands to support it well so it wouldnt go to waste? Think about it.

Well, regarding to your piece. It was merely a simple personal verse that was executed through emotions. The reality of those kind of situations would really make you realize how to appreciate something while you still have it.

"My soul is missing a string, the melody of my life is out of tune
But still i sing to myself, its the only way to escape my mind"

These lines were very strong that made the whole thing brilliant. I am very emotional when it comes to these kinds of terms. Just made me think of something about my life ..and music and rythms are one of them..just how you compiled words makes it different from any other lines from your verse.


It was worth reading it.

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