Thread: **Life In My Eyes**
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Old 10-27-03, 05:19 PM   #5
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this was a good read, different type of flow to it, i felt it had a good aspect an the wordplay was good i think your vocab cud have been a little stronger but it was a nice piece keep it up peace
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