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Old 10-27-03, 06:00 PM   #3
D-Dizzle
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THis was pretty good, good vocab and methaphor usage, flow was on. Seem to turn into a high-end battle rhyme toward the end. And you started off so strong at the begining that the rest didn't add up. still a good drop though
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