nice job Deva proply one of the first pieces I've read by u which is kinda surprising but as far as I can say I liked it. but I have to agree ur structure was pretty wack but u had the flow and tha multi's fo sho. not much I can really point out to say cept this was a good piece oh and ur had some pretty good imagery in this piece to I thought. keep up the droppin man. peace

down our throats, playing pool and laugh at bad jokes, when we get to the final place, race to a cubical, credit card cutting, white fuel, more durable, checkout the finer discard the unworthy

polish ma shoes then meet at ma local, already vocal from the vodka I total’d

^^ some nice lines man.

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