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Old 10-27-03, 10:54 PM   #7
Yaz
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iight this was a weird n0ob battle but ya...

shay-D:
dawg u had no flow, no good punchs, terrible ryme scheme(u said everything again and again). Your finish was hella good dawg. But u need to elevate majorly dawg like serios, get crackin.

Mc-UsKi
u got some serois shit to work out, if shayd would put less sylibols in his finishes he would have my vote, u had some good punchs and shit, but u could use a lot of work yourself dawg.

flow-shayd
rhymescheme-uski
personals-shayd
finisher-shayd
vocab-uski
punchs- not veary well but uski
Over all-Uski

Id set a vote but i don't got enough posts, so ya w/e least it some ways to help u out.

Peace out (\1/)
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