I love this. You mom will be proud. You rhymescheme was great and every word fitted together perfectly. Good work.

Can you check out and drop a comment on my open mic peice. It's called Mom I'm sorry. It's written in a different style to this and I want some feed back on it.
And I'm gonna pm you soon askin you somethin. Keep checkin you pm's.
Once again good work on this I enjoyed readin it and sorry bout your mom.


Peace!!!

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect