I think this sux

Nah..

U used a nice immagy man ...and some ok vocab..flowed well..but not on all points in my eyes..
Niceley exucuted, open mic, ..only i think it could have bein a little longer, but i cant find things to break down , only the fact than in my opinon the flow, wsnt always there, ..but the concept removed that bad thing' for me all and all a real nice read, ..
Specially like the intro

I speak graffiti in the haunting, The ghost writer
The phantom painter, Poltergiest lone ink rider

Was a good opener, ..i liked it...

Props

Pz

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