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Old 10-28-03, 03:16 PM   #8
Lethargic
Middle Weight
 
Posts: 828
From: Campbellsville
IP:

Cryptic's Verse

No punches, It'd be a miracle even if ya hands connected
Sifference is I rise to the occasion, You just stand corrected

1st line was eh and slightly played, second was nice

I'm dangerous duke, i'll shove a clock through ya spine
Its still the present, but I just pushed Thorn back in time

1st line build-up, 2nd line was good, woulda been great if you worded it better

Thorn just some net slime, facin me to get your head fried
Thorn is like Due Dates, nothin live, just some deadlines

1st line filler, second was decent

Misplacing your flow... Slut you have none
Even thought I'd give you your first loss... But you had one

Okay....second was nice, lol

Berate this cat quick...and before he gets over it
He'll break down in saabs like poor Swedish motorists

1st line filler, 2nd line's dope, lol

Beat you into all colors of the rainbow...To prove ya gay pride
I'm elite bitch so take this KO... And get this thorn out my side

1st line's played, second was weak...weak closer

Good verse overall...a couple played lines, but all in all it was good.

Thorn's Verse

A Weak Punch Flowin Fillers, Like Light Weight Boxers wit Cavaties
Ur Lines were more Gruesome Than Old Wars faught wit Cavalry

1st line's played, 2nd wasn't too hard hitting

This Game is Mine In All Faces, Like Completed Rubix Cubes
Cleansin The RB Herb Garden? An Excuse for battling Newbs

1st line eh, 2nd was nice

This Kid is Out of Date, like Mullets and Intetional Cow Licks
Cryp Knew the battle would Lean to 1 side so Posted in Italic

1st line bleh, 2nd was decent

He cant Believe My Delivery, Like its Ovened Pizza Digorno
Ya lines are More tired than Couples Shootin Old Mature Pornos

1st was gay. 2nd was nice, lol. Coulda been worded better though.

Just as I expected, Talkin about Guns Shows you Lack Creativity
Kid Being Bad Isn't Considered not Participatin in School Activitys

1st line bleh, 2nd line...no

'Keyin Up my Loss Now", Thats what this Bitch Actually Wrote
Know how he's 16-0? Three words..........Warlord Crew Votes

1st line sucked, 2nd was hard hitting

Decent verse, but you need to word your lines better. Your opener consisted of a ridiculously played line. That doesn't help matters. It was a pretty decent verse though. Just needs a little refinement.

Overall it was a close battle. However..

Punches - Cryptic
Originality - Tie
Structure - Thorn
Flow - Cryptic
Opener - Cryptic
Closer - Thorn
Enjoyability - Cryptic
Wordplay - Cryptic(Close)

Vote ~ Cryptic