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Old 10-28-03, 03:31 PM   #21
Lethargic
Middle Weight
 
Posts: 828
From: Campbellsville
IP:

Fonnix, I'm in your crew, and Tu...you know I'm not some janky ass newbie. So, I'm hoping you guys allow this vote. I always vote honestly.

Fonnix's Verse

Aisle 5, I can tell ya lost ur centz, battlin me, ya outta ya gord//
tired of bein owned by feeble and com so u turned warlord//

1st line blah, 2nd was decent

ya said a diamond was forever, well u musta been a cubic//
stilla herb witta new name, don't u get it, u as slow as young p's first pubic//

Okay, personal...poorly worded, 2nd was kinda eh

usin words like witty thinkin u might be liked and gain respect//
change ya ip, ya name, whatever ya want you'll never be a vet//

1st line filler, 2nd is lacking anything hard hitting

i bring tha pain, lika dentist opperating witout novacaine//
u could change ur name ta EA but would never be IN tha Game//

1st played, 2nd was good

LLL can have ur remains, cremated and free of charge//
i'mma call u pussy cuz u ain't hard, or real, Aisle 5 is justa mirage//

1st line filler, closer was kinda weak fam

Tu's Verse

The Key Componets Of A Battle.. Obviously Fonnix Musta Not Remembered...
This Battle Was Against Me Homie.. Why You Dissin Crew Members?

Opener wasn't very strong

Known For Battlin Newbs... Fucka Mixtape Learn How To Rap Hoe...
And Weren't You The Same Person That Barely Edged Out A Victory To JKO?

1st line was okay...2nd was decent

Leave Fonnix Doomed... Depressing Thoughts Enter His Mind When Reading This
Now Fuck LLL... How U Steppin To Me When You Ain't Make The Elite List?

1st line filler, 2nd was devestating

Formerly In Diamond Mindz.. Cut For Bein Wack.. Just Quit Ya Bitchin..
Co-Leader Of HIV? Yet This Second Rate Netcee Is Still Doing Missions

Didn't know that....1st line was good, 2nd was nice...good point too

HIV? They Shouldn't Have Let You In Because Only Illness Was Allowed
Yea You Lost This Battle.. But In Return I Gave You Something To Cry About...

Personal....Closer was dope

Tu came weak for about the first 4 lines, but after that...it was damage. Fonnix, you came decent, just nothing that really stood out. Good verses and a nice battle....

Vote ~ Tu